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又是一篇英语日记[帮我检查错误]
Monday 28th,January cold
I am feeling a little bit unhappy today ,because my parents can not keep a promise .They primised to take me to the zoo,however,they have something important to finish suddenly,so I can not visit the zoo at present.I stay at home alone and watch TV,but it isn't more interesting than visit the zoo.I hate my parents!
At night,my parent come back home.My mother buy a lot of delicious food and drink from supermarket,my father buy a new VCD for me.I think that they just want to please me ,but I can not excuse them for it.
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Monday 28th,January cold
I FELT a little bit unhappy today , because my parents DIDN'T keep THE promise .They PROMISED to take me to the zoo,however,they HAD something important to finish suddenly.So I couldn't visit the zoo TODAY.I STAYED at home alone and WATCHED TV,but it WASN'T more interesting than visiting the zoo.I hate my parents!
At night,my parent CAME back home.My mother BOUGHT a lot of delicious food and drinkS from THE supermarket,my father BOUGHT a new VCD for me.I THOUGHT that they just WANTED to please me ,but I COULD NOT FORGIVE them for it.
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